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The surrounding is quiet, only the tree branches oscillating sound could be heard in the dark, dark night. The kite seems like being tightly pulled by some creatures, the kite could not be release from the tree no matter how hard he pulled it. "Wh...What's that!" Suddenly the kite has been released from the tree and make him fall back, just at the moment when he fell, he saw a pair of red-eye blinking at him from the tree.
What's that? To be continue by you, readers~

5 comments |

5 comments:

  1. Chenyi
    February 26, 2011 at 5:35 AM

    The setting evokes a sense of fear and suspense in the reader. I feel that the story would be about a dog where the dog would the personal's best friend. But at the end, the dog would eventually return to the wild or die while protecting the personal

  1. Lim Jerome
    February 26, 2011 at 6:20 PM

    The dark setting gives readers a sense of mystery and suspense. With nobody around, the persona is in great danger. But i think that the persona's kite is being pulled by a bat as they have red eyes and can cling on to trees. It probably wanted to protect itself from danger and thus clung on to the kite. The persona would run away and the bat would chase him. The story would end with the persona and the bat being good friends.

  1. Darryl Ling
    February 26, 2011 at 9:18 PM

    This paricular setting gives readers a sense that something dangerous or mysterious is going to happen. I think that the kite is being pulled by a nocturnal animal probably a bat as said by Jerome or maybe an owl as it has red eyes. Perhaps the ending will end either pitifully or peacefully with the animal helping the persona.

  1. chessGM
    February 27, 2011 at 5:00 AM

    Probably about a ghost or something like that keeping an eye on the boy and the boy has many scary moment after that.

  1. Mysterian
    February 28, 2011 at 3:31 AM

    Although the setting is good, but I don't think your photo is suitable, furthermore the graphic's resolution is very bad. I think that your story is about mystery and weird things happened. It is a scary incident of a person in the place where there were lots of tree, but the persona still played kites there. And the red eyes from the tree were most likely the eyes of a wild nocturnal flying animal, such as bats, owls, etc. In the end, the persona would learn the moral not to play kites in the trees-filled place.

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